So while I am working on redoing the concept of Sons of Caina, so it will become Bedlam Lullabies (and I am not sure it will keep that title, but for now it’s the placeholder title, unless something more clever comes up.)
And while I am not writing a story in Welsh, then because even if I am very fucking vague with placing it, then it need some sort of anchor, since history is a big part of this story. Unlike Heart Shaped Tattoos, which didn’t need a specific place to work, this one sort of does.
But omg all those goddamn W and Y’s is driving me nuts. I mean just like all other dialects of Gaelic, I don’t find it difficult to pronounce – but their spelling wow… the Finnish has nothing on the Welsh. Just sayin.
It is just not a pretty language, sorry not sorry. It sounds like a drunk Dutchman, trying to speak Faroese.
Anyways, so
I did make some progress, in the way that I decided on my weird ass hybrid made up creature, for now I am thinking it is a genetic mutation which can stay dormant when both parents does not carry the gene. Not sure how that will work, or if it’s even important, but well i like to worldbuild, just in case. (I learned my lesson from Kryos) The important bit is really, that it’s something you’re born with.
Also I decided that the hybrid is called the Lleuadine, or well that is what they call themselves. lleuad means moon in Welsh as far as I can figure out, and yes I googled that, but I didn’t rely on one source only. Luckily the Welsh is really into their history, so there are plenty sites to get information from.
Lleuadine is a made up word, but I think it fits.
You can read about the family trees and read the short explanation I made for myself to find my own way around the very confusing family relations. And yes I am aware that I wrote Elben instead of Elgar in the family tree and the explanation, but I can’t be arsed to correct it, since it’s basically just my own notes. You can see that here on my story note archive.
So there’s that.
And for shits and giggles I decided to use an image that is otherwise only available on my redbubble (for now at at least, I am thinking about pulling it down) – as a desktop, just for anyone reading this. click the image of the computer below to be taken to Box.net and download it.

So besides that, I promised you a snippet – and that you shall have. This is a part of the first chapter of the story. And I might make changes from this to the final draft, but it is minor edits for repeating words, syntax errors and other stuff like that. Click the banner to be taken to a Canva online PDF



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